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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-01-08 05:41 AM

It’s a poor Sanctuary,
Barely even sanitary,
That she’s run off to now shed;
But no commotion
Of emotion
A little privacy instead.
Make-up once done
Now random run
Leaving eyes of blue and red,
She had to depart
Stabbed in the heart
With the words harshly said,
Tears unseen
Now wiped clean,
Repainted held high head.

Gloom

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2004-01-08 07:17 AM

I really enjoyed this Professor. I've found myself seeking this temporary sanctuary on more than one occasion. You've masterfully captured this moment in time where one finds privacy to pull themselves together and walk back out with their head held high - no onlookers any the wiser. Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2004-01-08 07:24 AM

This is so well portrayed. I've made a few trips to that room, so no one would know how deep those words have cut.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-08 09:28 AM

You have that right! What insight you have! Always enjoy reading you.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-01-08 11:36 AM

ProfGloom~
Oh yes ... this one finds familiarity within the all of me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

5 posted 2004-01-08 11:41 AM

You've definately captured a common experience amongst us females - except there are a few other rooms; every room in my house that has seen this experience. What I wonder is where does a guy go in a tense moment?

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-01-08 12:32 PM

Good to see another post of yours. They can be addictive... They keep getting better and better! You so capture the inner emotions!

Catchy title, too.
Sadie

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-01-08 12:37 PM

Gloomy,

You know women! I too have ran off to the bathroom to shed my tears in private...

Well done!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-01-08 12:42 PM

me, I just stand wherever I'm at and cry, so what if my makeup runs and makes me look terrible...my pain will not be hidden

good write, and made me think

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

9 posted 2004-01-08 01:17 PM

I love this.

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

10 posted 2004-01-08 01:19 PM

This is neatly stated. I like the ending. After a good "release" brought on by a hurt, it feels great to be "repainted" and stand tall. Excellent!

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2004-01-08 03:04 PM

You certainly do know and tell life well sir, it cuts deep.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

12 posted 2004-01-08 03:10 PM

it truly is a beloved sanctuary...
One I know too well,
Though I guess not really that much, since I'm usually alone anway
...isn't it ironic.
anyway, I love this.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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