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Winter's Kiss (Tanka)
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Winter's Kiss (Tanka) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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Ice glazed window panes Chimneys puff glad tidings high Under foot snow speaks~ Crunchy chuckles of winter Season of frost-bound kisses . . Chris Barker January 2004 ~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmmmm frost bound kisses. Love this one Chris...isn't it cold? Tanka for these winter thoughts. ~Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed~ In the midst of winter.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you for sharing this vision with me, down here in Florida where I don't get to see |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
yes indeed ...... the northeast has been kissed!!! but the thought between these words find the heart, my heart warming, against the elements! a pleasure the read and comment once again. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Where ice in crystal castle grows a heart so red, 'tis like a rose I'll be found here, reading you amongst the winter pages blue  |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Oh, Yes! Chris. Vivid images, and feelings, your pivot works beautifully moving equally both ways ....And of course, a Tanka, my favorite form...so terse, so condensed....~C  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Such warm comments! Thankyou all so much. Karilea....yes..hugs! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Chris, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I have missed your gorgeous poetry so much while on vacation but now I'm back, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, have a warm and blessed winter, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
"Crunchy chuckles of Winter" I will never again walk through the snow without this image of giggling. Love it! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Just delightful! Crunchy chuckles of winter Season of frost-bound kisses Love, Margherita  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou dear poets three! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nightshade - h'mmmm, makes me wanna pucker... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill......  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I could not have come close to doing this as well as you have. Great write Chris.. Thanx dear lady... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a wonderful picture you paint poet. TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magnus & TD, you are both very sweet. Thankyou !! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Just for a moment, you made me want to move back North! Good one! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
thankyou iliana !! You should see it here to-day....a winter wonderland it is. hugs,Chris |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Won't be too cold with a warm kiss or two...James |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Very nice, Chris...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Tanka for this beauty Charisma |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou All !! |
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