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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-01-10 08:00 AM




Winter builds its fence around
the sky cast in
a spell of uncertainty

faint as baby's breath
my hearts beats dormantly
as a sleeping daffodil,

once i was in love with love
eyes full of constellations
i was brimming with flowers

the grass is dreaming for me

snowmen line the frostbit ground
dripping like intraveneous
into the world of pipedreams
that simmer below,

I wonder what they are conjuring up for me


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-01-10 08:17 AM


inkedgoddess
Why another year my dear.

RSWells
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2 posted 2004-01-10 12:40 PM


You are, after all, an irrepressible romantic. That's a good thing. Enjoyed
garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-01-10 12:42 PM


Hi Michele. Yes, I believe that your
poetry will always have romance in it.
Because you are like me...you love romance.
Hugs  
Ethel

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2004-01-10 12:43 PM


Michele - yes, I believe they are conjuring for you...

BC

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-01-10 01:30 PM


girl, you'll always be full of beauty and love, even in the harsh frozen winter
Margherita
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6 posted 2004-01-10 05:51 PM


... eyes full of constellations ...

The daffodils will bloom in time again.

Very beautiful!
Love, Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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7 posted 2004-01-10 08:05 PM


thanks for reading and stopping by as i wait for the daffodils once again
bklynboy
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8 posted 2004-01-10 09:51 PM


arent we all in love with love.....interesting stuff!
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