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Emotion #53923
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Emotion #53923 |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Green & Venomous Misfortunes to Victims Greedily Wish Things Unpleasant Stalking Conscious Thought Consuming Sanity Sanity Consuming Thought Conscious Stalking Unpleasant Things Wish Greedily Victims to Misfortunes Venomous & Green Jealousy [This message has been edited by McLean (01-10-2004 06:36 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jealousy and I are old friends... I don't like him and he doesn't like me. LOL...but we do admire each other's green eyes. Well done! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
jelously is a sickness and a very terrible situation to be in...or with. Good one |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Lee J...I started to title this one "sickness"...you are so very right about that. I don't like it very much at all. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
that lil green monster has bitten many people in it's time, but such an ugly lil thing it is though.... very well done... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Extremely well written piece on that green eyed monster. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
I can't write enough about the pain of jealousy. And you can say, "I'm not a jealous person all you want," but at the end of the day, we are all one way. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfect |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
reversals can be contagious... enjoyed the format...and once upon a time, I saw green and the monster was in me...but no more~ oh and I meant to ask are there 53922 emotions before this one  Maureen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
McLean~ You painted this one vividly~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...reminded me that I wrote one recently about jealousy...if I find it I'll post it...of course I know its in one of my ten or so notebooks...unless its one of the stolen ones...James |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Thanks everyone for the comments. I would very much like to read your poem on Jealousy, James, if you can find it. Everything I've read of you thus far is so sweet...happy...it would be nice to see if you have familiarity with emotion #53923! Yes, I believe there are MANY numbers of emotions, when you look at their relevance and strengths. I wrote this becuase I wanted to try a reflective poem. "Jealousy" just seemed to be an easy beginning. I'd love to see other reflective poems in here!!! Give it a try! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Sadly jealousy is such a devastating disease and affects too many people and I only pray that happiness for others can be the cure to this emotion, as happiness would be the #1 emotion! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet McLean, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
How very clever this work is! Its forward, backward, and upside down!That's not easy,,,,,,not only that, it makes sense,,,,,,good job!!!  Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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