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Open Poetry #30

Violent Swords -REWRITE

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-01-09 11:20 AM

I am holding back to the fight within me,
trying to make peace.
I had lost everything I hold dear to me,
now I want those things back.
My life once had been grand.
The fight inside me is hard to control.
The rotten air that captures me and holds me down,
from the people who have wronged me.
The words so pure,I answer my revenge.
The fairness in my words, that I fight with
My answer not in violence,
Words, my answer is found.
Upon my lips lay a heavy burden,
no apology will be accepted.
Fighting back with words stronger than violent swords.

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

1 posted 2004-01-09 11:41 AM

fight your corner
arthur

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

2 posted 2004-01-09 12:40 PM

This is good. I can feel the emotion that you have. I like that you make mention that your life was grand, but don't relish in the past or make excuses for why you are different now...just accepted. wow..great.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2004-01-09 11:31 PM

some of the toughest battles fought,,but rarely won, come from within,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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