Open Poetry #30 |
Whiteout in Portland |
kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
White out in Portland I’m deep in my igloo Struggling with a frozen keyboard. Echos of keystrokes bounce off snowbanks, Clattering like light machine gun fire. Frustrated cursings resonate With a deeper voice than I have. Shingles and treelimbs quiver Like tuning forks, conducted By a rogue virago, standing In for Mother Nature. Crows slide on frozen snow while autos don wrinkles. Cross country skiers cavort on trails of neighborhood streets. Children, freed from school’s tedium, gambol in weather hookey. Rhododendrons droop with ice-lined eyebrows. Buses, like swollen sardine tins, wobble through the slush. Merchants eye their doors that do not open. Travelers pack the restrooms while frozen aircraft watch. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
The imagery in this is superb! Well done, KayJay... I do hope you thaw out soon! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
liked this... the images and the flow all add to the overall "mood" of being snowed in... good stuff |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
This is great. I've never seen snow, and you've showed it to me in full force. Thank you. Now I know I probably never want to see it;-) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've heard of snow days where you just don't move, everything shuts down.... my brother sent me some pictures of the last great snow in Virginia...covered the tops of the cars in the parking lot I'm so glad I'm in Florida |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great imagery in this, Kayjay. I heard it was snowing up there. I'd like to see a bit of it here...a very tiny bit! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh Ken! You make me want to jump on the next flight to Portland. You are teasing me with this snowy write! Love the imagery...fantastic! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Cross country skiers cavort on trails of neighborhood streets. Children, freed from school’s tedium, gambol in weather hookey. Rhododendrons droop with ice-lined eyebrows. Wonderful imagery Ken! Enjoyed. Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
The sunshine folks are checking in with words of awe and praise. But also they are very glad that they don't have these days. For all who sent their kindness here I welcome them with all good cheer. Ken (We've had 4 days of being totally homebound, often even too slick to walk outside.) Through rubble and trouble and dark of night The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my, and Ken, I'm the one that's always wanting to see the snow that you and Nancy Lee write about. Now, this may be just a little too much snow. LOL I guess I'll just stick to the sand. LOL Hugs Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you write of it well, but please keep it where you are, i want to be snow free for a while, thanks |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Congratulations on your 1,000th post KayJay! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, I heard about that peculiar Pacific storm two weeks ago, all the way from Seattle to Las Vegas! (giggles) I am moving to Portland May of 2005 and I guess I can't be sure I'll be free from the snow entirely now when going there, where I've been told it rarely snows here! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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