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Stardust Mirrored Me
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
somewhere between the moon and this place I stand lie a billion bits of stars that broken as they are by the force of time were doomed by lack of gravity to crumble and haze my view across this distant space. I wonder do they reflect as I in introspection wish I could? I would see myself in them as a distorted mirage to piece together one sliver to another over eons infinitely wiser for having put the puzzle into a whole Yet all I see between this, the nights moon, and me, is the dust of what they used to be perhaps indeed this is the image mirrored of me |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
So much emotion given to star's dust... but not all is inanimate... especially when so moving... Enjoyed this, my friend. Thank you. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Yet all I see between this, the nights moon, and me, is the dust of what they used to be'''' ~~ of what used to be....sigh, dont I know it...  hugssss  you write emotion well... Lauren~ ~*~ |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
An emotional write.... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A philosophical ponder Ron. But like a star you shed light on the matter. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I would see myself in them as a distorted mirage to piece together one sliver to another over eons infinitely wiser for having put the puzzle into a whole sometimes all we can do is hope we come ahead wiser than we were before.. very introspective and very well done capt! It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Captain! Yer so good! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I echo my sister Enchantress's comments. hugs, Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPat~ Oh my ... if it has to do with the moon I LIKE IT~ Nicely done~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*` ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ron, simply exquisite, and you know that picture you had of the bionic space-age woman I had that in my head the entire time reading this for some reason. I tend to personify most of your work though. Loved this one. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
perhaps indeed this is the image mirrored of me well I certainly think there is more to you than that.. beautiful write M |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron...You shine pretty bright from over here! Pondering and poignant, is this poem. I enjoyed as always. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
lie a billion bits of stars that broken as they are by the force of time were doomed by lack of gravity to crumble and haze my view Nicely stated! Enjoyed, Sadelite |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Yet all I see between this, the nights moon, and me, is the dust of what they used to be" Read this morning, and knew I needed time to do justice in my reply... And still find myself in lack for words.. Ron, it is one of many favorites by you...the rest of what I am trying to say...you already know.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Yet all I see between this, the nights moon, and me, is the dust of what they used to be" Good stuff! |
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