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Dreams for Gold |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Dreams for Gold The sun plays upon the swale As water runs the broken shale Old fingers poke the flecks of gold And a crooked smile waxes bold A frothy voice begins in lust Show your face you golden dust Fill the bottom of the sleuth You are the payment for my youth With you I’ll buy my every dream And every one that I can scheme I’ll trade your glitter for a life Maybe even get a wife And you my burro, I’ll take you We’ll go together just us two You’ll have the best to feed upon We’ll be as kings in this Yukon Each miner digs their own declare But time does take the larger share |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fill the bottom of the sleuth You are the payment for my youth With you I’ll buy my every dream And every one that I can scheme I’ll trade your glitter for a life Maybe even get a wife And you my burro, I’ll take you We’ll go together just us two You’ll have the best to feed upon We’ll be as kings in this Yukon Each miner digs their own declare But time does take the larger share ===================================== YOUR poetry is the gold I pan for.  Does Randy know about this burro??? LOL  Im sneaking in for mothy minute...no luck reviving my old computer-- Gonna go look for one later today Sybabes.    Nature poets can't walk across the backyard without tripping over an epiphany. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, So glad to see your smiling words. Sorry about the computer. It's only recently that mine is working. Had to send it back three time before they told me I had the wrong chip added. And I was lucky to get it replaced I had tried to make it work so long they almost wouldn't replace it. Luck today. WWRS |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good Morning...what a write! Happy Friday! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Old fingers poke the flecks of gold And a crooked smile waxes bold A frothy voice begins in lust Show your face you golden dust ~*~ This is one day I won't get the dust rag out and will just leave this shining gem here in all its glory. Good morning, Sy! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Nice balance and word flow. Those dreams followed in youth do come back to haunt us. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy Guy!! Another delightful read awaiting us this winter's morn. Time for some hot tea...sister will be along with snacks soon. ~Morning hugs and tea on this TGIFriday!~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
The dreams that you, dear Seymour gift us with, are all made of gold. hugs and strawberry tarts this snowy morn. Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Golden verses Sy. Much enjoyed the images. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you sweet you are a treat. Sunshine Good morning love and thank you for the egos tea. kayjay Yes they do. Hugs scorpio Would you like a little gold dust? LOL Nancy and Chris, I'll be there for tea and tarts. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodmorning, Seymour  As alwaysm, it's a delight to read you today. Hope you have a good day, my friend. Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Thank you my sweet I look forward to your reads. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..well told Sy... but be careful mentioning that burro.. Toe will have it out you and the critter are romantically linked... LOL nice poem my friend..I enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat, That's true I forgot all about toe. LOL |
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