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Unfinished Dance in Annapolis
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Unfinished Dance in Annapolis |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Come inside Take my hand Let me show you My world, who I am Cover my eyes, and make me feel yours Place your hand upon my chest My heart beats out your name Pull your face close Caress the warmth of you on my lips My love for you knows no end You made this easy You made me see The dance? Baby, you already are And it’s finished when I take my last breath Until then, move with me Move for me Move me "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
The dance? Baby, you already are And it’s finished when I take my last breath Until then, move with me Move for me Move me I love this. This could have been the entire poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love it when poets thoughts flow together. This is very nice, Susan. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The dance? Baby, you already are And it’s finished when I take my last breath Until then, move with me Move for me Move me" Beautiful Susan...softly sensual, and much enjoyed. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
coming from MD and loving Annapolis I can relate to some..and when I was very young...I was invited to the Merchant Marine Academy Dance in NY... was really too young to appreciate all ...but the dancing was wonderful. ~smiling M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.. nicely done Susan.. and it has an air of happiness.. that sits well on you.. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is very beautiful |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
I never forgot that dance or you. Ten years was worth the wait. The poem is beautiful and I remember everything! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"Cover my eyes, make me feel yours" I can visualize the trust. Very nicely penned. Much enjoyed. Sadelite |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
o that dance of love and it is a dance isnt it? this is sweet but forlorn just how i like them |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Susan - I like this, very romantic and close... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, I know the dance of love too. Isn't it the most precious thing?  Hugs  Ethel |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You definitely bring out the Aqualung in me...*grin* |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
one should be so moved by these enticing words  |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
susan this is lovely...Me is moved to read this....beautifully written.... always harash |
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