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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-01-08 03:48 PM

I face you
On a bad day
On the green
Wind crescendo

I sit before you
Have the time
Await the wind
The cleansing rhyme

No one in this life knows
Your innermost thoughts
You are to them
A game

You bring strength
You bring the past
You tell of the future
You give peace at last

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2004-01-08 03:52 PM

sweet,
aye tis a subtle gem from your pen.

huzzzaaahhhhhhh!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-01-08 03:59 PM

Dave~
I like this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2004-01-09 01:39 AM

i won't bore you with why this poem spoke and touches on my life at this moment.. but i will say that it is one that i wish i had been able to write ...

i'm glad i read you tonight.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-01-09 02:58 AM

Dave -- I really liked this one, as well!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-01-09 05:13 AM

peace at the end of chaos

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

6 posted 2004-01-09 05:34 AM

very interesting I like it

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2004-01-09 06:13 AM

Dave,

This works well with the rest. I liked.

No one in this life knows
Your innermost thoughts
You are to them
A game

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

8 posted 2004-01-09 06:41 PM

Thanks for the words.
It is a poem I still feel I need to balance but the peace to just do nothing means a lot at times whilst adversity whips around the peace.

Dave

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