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alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
DIMINISH I have been banished to the dark side of my mind Where only thoughts that diminish work their magic Hell’s spirit laughs in my face and sends echoes This brings a chill to my spine leaving the deepest marking Why do I visit such a horrendous place? The place that only feeds forces capable of harming me I have let my life live on its own terms And on the way it has lived without my knowing Oh, the utter despair this cast upon me! I NEED somebody to feed off of to gain sanity I need someone to love me through the deepest depths of oceans Never wanting to be dry again! Thanks for taking the time to look at this! Please tell me what you think. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes we need sad to be able to feel happy, or because sad is all we can feel at that time, all that makes us feel alive I like this poem |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
not many like to visit their dark side,,,,not many are brave enough to say "I need"...very good Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alan~ 'I need someone to love me through the deepest depths of oceans Never wanting to be dry again!' I have known this moisturized saturation ... beautifully said~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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