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Open Poetry #30

Bleed Endless Sufferance

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-01-07 07:59 PM

Though outside I'm smiling,
Inside my heart is crying.
Inside my soul is dying,
But outside I'm smiling.
Withered and fraying,
How to keep from decaying.
Though outside I'm smiling,
Inside my heart is crying.
Inside my soul is dying,
But outside I'm smiling.
These thoughts and reality I confuse,
I have everything in life to lose.
Though outside I'm smiling,
Inside my heart is crying.
Inside my soul is dying,
But outside I'm smiling.
Afraid to lose you hoping I never will,
Far away from you I love you still.
Though outside I'm smiling,
Inside my heart is crying.
Inside my soul is dying,
But outside I'm smiling.
Inside...
I'm dying.

RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB-

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-01-07 10:31 PM

Snowflake, I love the form you wrote this
poem in. It's very interesting. Thanks
for sharing it with us.

Hugs

Ethel

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

2 posted 2004-01-08 02:51 PM

Hey kiddo you ok?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-01-08 04:08 PM

Kyle~

I liked this ... and the form appeared to me to be one word-bucket overflowing into the next ... very nicely done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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