Open Poetry #30 |
January Tenderness |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Their glow, glorious Soul lights slipping each a sigh Sun streams moon a kiss Wolf has found his loving mate January tenderness |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine A sweet message. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Great word choice in "Sun streams Moon a kiss". Wonderful photography as well. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh....I was hoping there would be another this morning... and I wasn't disappointed! Great write lovely lady. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"Sun streams moon a kiss" I loved that line. Most enjoyable to read! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Such a lovely, lovely Senryu~ GORGEOUS MOON PHOTO ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...a tender view! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
they say a full moon, everyone goes a little crazy...well I've been watching this Jan. full moon rising and it is all that you describe and more...Sunshine...life is so electric and all penetrating...and the gravitational pull alures...magestic is this universe in all of it's amazing secrets... I love your writes...and the new picture. Have a great day! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Jan- can be tender, thanks for reminding me..... hugsss Lauren~ ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunningly gorgeous! |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
I saw the moon last night, in all its fullness, and in reading your poem today, I recall that sight, and the warmth it brought despite the chilly air. Very, very good! McLean |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Here, January is the coldest of the months. The moon does look so beautiful when it's freezing outside, doesn't it? Beautiful, Sun, I love this month. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was short, sweet and totally breathtaking! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart, this is awesome in its simplicity, and stunningly beautiful. I’m so rarely in the forums these days, or if I am, I’m in and out again very quickly. Still I had to stop by and read and reply to your wonderful poem, as always its excellent darling heart, I love it utterly, utterly, utterly. as always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful...the poem and the picture. Thanks for sharing with us, Karilea. Heart: Hugs Ethel |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
In the still cold of the night the howl of the wolf would carry and touch the soul of man. Much as this write reaches out. believe in what your heart feels... |
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