Open Poetry #30 |
A Wasted Life |
Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
A Wasted Life Eyes look But do not see past the obvious Lips speak Thoughtless, meaningless rhetoric Ears hear the spoken word And nothing more Hands reach to hold And find emptiness A life exists But is not experienced Such a tragic waste Of such a precious gift Enotneicna SLW (SLR) 1-7-04 Words are my medicine. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
An empty gift, a very good poem.A waste I feel. Jason |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Meaningful write. hugs.....jo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eyes look But do not see past the obvious Lips speak Thoughtless, meaningless rhetoric Ears hear the spoken word And nothing more Hands reach to hold And find emptiness Oh, this is so sad, yet a beautiful write. Hugs Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearestAncientOne~ You spill wisdom in each drop of this poetic inking~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
Jason.....too many lives are wasted this way! I used to be one of them!!!!!!! Brad....Thanks!!!!! Iliana.......Thank you...huggsss back Ethel.....yes very sad...thank you for reading. Many blessings to you all always Eno Marge......Dear Sisterfriend I haven't written in so long......spirit brings wisdom when we least expect it but when we need it most!!!!! much love and many blessings Always Eno Words are my medicine. |
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