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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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Consumed me in your madness. At the least, you could regurgitate if I don't sit that well. Yet, you leave me undigested. I'm curdling here inside. Spit me out if I taste sour. Have mercy on my pride. Iliana |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
Hey illina..this is very offensive...you wrote it with direct messagae the fellow you want... great write...I should say just excellent.. Harash |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Harash, thank you for your comments. At the time I wrote it, I meant every word -- but time does change the way we feel about many things, doesn't it. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice, short and to the point, I like that in poetry. As for the feelings that spawned the poem “Time wounds all heels” or something like that, get yourself a nice pick coat and sooth the nerves with a sweet cup of tea. Gloom |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
As for that particular heel -- yes, time did wound it! Tea is good. Thanks for stopping by, Gloom. As for the myth behind the other poem you read -- Third Installment of Weobaei, there is none -- unless you would want to compare it with the Biblical story of Joseph and his multicolored coat. The strange words in the Weobaei poems (and there will be a series which will define what these words really mean; you learn by reading) are words invented in me -- hope you have a chance to read the first two. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Isn't it funy how some people would rather choke and have pain,,,than let you go? good write,,,,take care Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
This is so great! I have felt that way many times...like the digestee, not the digester. ^5 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this one hit home...very clever write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed the smile I received from this.. but it is oh so true with some people! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Iliana - I just received an email from the person to whom your poem was intended. He asked me to post his poem for him in response to your wonderful poem. OK? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Iliana...if nothing else, this poem has been inspirational...  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Great write! Enjoyed. Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
ILLIANA...please disregard those two crude/rude guys...Balladeer and LongJohn, I'm the only one you can trust...sweet, shy, quiet, subdued Toerag....I'm sure you've noticed that I'm the good guy with the white hat...those two are evil!!!!!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh brother bring on the antacid please is right - look what you started iliana. Short and to the point this was but they are off and running with it, LOL  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yep, iliana, it doesn't take much to get those three nuts off and running.   Hugs,  Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Michelle -- yes, I guess it is funny -- just look at how funny our three fellows think it is! hugs McLean - The wrong love can do that to you -- such a helpless feeling. Thanks for posting. Passing Shadows -- Thanks for reading -- hope it didn't hit too hard. Enchantress -- Thanks a bunch -- yes, sometimes its just too hard to confront situations, I guess. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LngJhnAg -- Why, you certainly do have your days, don't you?!! Sunshine -- Yes, I am seeing that -- I must have struck either a nerve or a funny bone! Thanks for reading. Chris - you doll, thank you for your comment. Toerag -- thank you for Toeragging along, ooppps no I meant tagging along. Should I believe you? Mysteria -- you aren't kidding! Thanks for visiting and the chuckle I felt when I read your remark. Ethel -- I'm in trouble now I fear. Thanks for posting! Beeee well! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
iliana - a write from in to out, nice... BC |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
BC -- from in to out -- now, that I have to ponder! Thanks for posting. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you say so very much in this punchy little poem - wow a real MESSAGE - Paul |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Don't pay any mind to those three rascals that seem to flit here and there and back again....and again.... Loved the metaphorical write, said well. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Paul -- thank you very much for your comment. hugs Magnus -- this is my first experience at seeing how they work -- pretty amusing stuff! Thanks for stopping by to see what all the comotion is about! And thanks for your comment about the metaphor. hugs |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Jo, this spawned such fun poetry... and don't believe 'em all...they really like one another hugs M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M -- Yep, generated a bunch of chuckles, for sure! Thanks for stopping by and have a great morning! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Iliana you do have gentle ways and so strong to be able to put up with those Bad Three Musketeers of PIP. Enjoyed the read. See Ya Bon-Bon "wave" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
BonnieJ -- Thanks for your sweet words! And, for stopping by. |
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