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"White Noise"
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"White Noise" |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Silently insinuating crystals in the atmosphere. Perfct pitch attenuates as forming winter storm draws near. Rarified, refrigerated wavelengths of a white requiem, filter from the heavens, falling, solemn, this procession seems. Musics' interlude, majestic, matching its composers' skills. Deafening, delightful, drowning silence echoes in the chill. Mutely stand before symphonic masterpiece of sight and sound, caught up in this cold, crisp cadence as it cascades to the ground. Briskly, big, bright flakes are humming to a different drummer, boys, as the sound of snow surrounds you, found in blanket of white noise. |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
What an awesome use of Alliteration |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr.Moose A delight to read. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doc~ You surrounded me in noise of white~ I LIKE this~ Nice to see you, sir~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You interpreted the silence masterfully ... Deafening, delightful, drowning silence echoes in the chill. Just beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Terrina, Thanks. A follow up to last months' workshop, it's a cool place to hang. Doc Sy, Thanks again, kind sir. Your take on things has inspired more than once. Doc Marge, If YOU like, I am at peace with this. (always doubting, trouble shooting, pompous pouting, hoo-ray hip- hooting!) Join me at the playground soon my friend. Doc Margherita, Thank you for your kind comments, if, for one brief second, I am able to transport someone from their surroundings to another place, my job is done. Doc |
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