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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2004-01-07 04:02 PM


Silently insinuating crystals in the atmosphere.
Perfct pitch attenuates as forming winter storm draws near.
Rarified, refrigerated wavelengths of a white requiem,
filter from the heavens, falling, solemn, this procession seems.

Musics' interlude, majestic, matching its composers' skills.
Deafening, delightful, drowning silence echoes in the chill.
Mutely stand before symphonic masterpiece of sight and sound,
caught up in this cold, crisp cadence as it cascades to the ground.

Briskly, big, bright flakes are humming to a different drummer, boys,
as the sound of snow surrounds you, found in blanket of white noise.

© Copyright 2004 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Terrina
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1 posted 2004-01-07 04:03 PM


What an awesome use of Alliteration
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-01-07 04:17 PM


Dr.Moose
A delight to read.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-01-07 05:43 PM


Doc~
You surrounded me in noise of white~
I LIKE this~

Nice to see you, sir~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
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4 posted 2004-01-07 06:08 PM


You interpreted the silence masterfully ...


Deafening, delightful, drowning silence echoes in the chill.

Just beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Dr.Moose1
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5 posted 2004-01-07 07:02 PM


Terrina,
Thanks. A follow up to last months' workshop, it's a cool place to hang.
Doc
Sy,
Thanks again, kind sir. Your take on things has inspired more than once.
Doc
Marge,
If YOU like, I am at peace with this. (always doubting, trouble shooting, pompous pouting, hoo-ray hip- hooting!) Join me at the playground soon my friend.
Doc
Margherita,
Thank you for your kind comments, if, for one brief second,
I am able to transport someone from their surroundings to another place, my job is done.
Doc

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