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Prayers on Wing - a duo's gift to Passions
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Prayers on Wing - a duo's gift to Passions |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The soul bares the burden of pain tinkling strained echoes of refrain As tears flow from emerald eyes seeking visions in the skies Light grows dim as weariness reigns somehow, I'd seek home again. In silence, heard, a broken heart sighs and becomes echoes from on high. This sorrow cloaks me, solitudes veil for anguish is but a shade of pale, Slowly stars fade into dawn’s hues and here are tucked, thoughts of you. I cry out, "God, for a moment, let peace prevail” A broken whisper so assails The sunlight’s sparkle on morning’s dew and here are thoughts, tucked, of you. I whisper your name, but can you hear might an echo be naught but clear? A voice calling gently on the wind perchance, might love be found again? Only blue heavens can see these tears only Your eyes might see the fear, Of this broken heart in weep again.... awaiting for a cleansing of all sins. ~*~ Thank you, Donna, for your most Gentle Spirit... |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Oh my, Karilea. This touches chords that play for all of us who read your wondrous words. You and Donna have found a lovely vehicle for a timeless plea for love. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Softly smiling at you...and Gentle Spirit. Beautifully penned. In the midst of winter.. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply lovely. Hugs to you both. Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 so good to read this from the you two, what a beautiful and soft write.... hugsssssx2 Lauren~ ~~**~~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I just don't understand!?? I would have done a duet with you or Gnetle Spirit. All you had to do was ask (and supply the kitties). I love this poem nevertheless. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Simply beautiful.. well done Donna and Karilea Maree. "i can feel so unsexy for someone so beautiful, so unloved for someone so fine |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful, Donna and Karilea...... surely a  Hugs to you both, :hugs  Ethel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My thanks to all for the lovely replies and especially to Karilea for the beauty of your words....again you have lifted my spirit to a place so very long forgotten...and so very much needing revisited...thank you.... Peace to all.... |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
This is beautiful!!!!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
might an echo be naught but clear? A voice calling gently on the wind perchance, might love be found again? Only blue heavens can see these tears only Your eyes might see the fear, Of this broken heart yes it may, if u seek it it is always there , it never left beauitful duo, u 2 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Again my thanks to each of you. It is a joy to duet with Sunshine! She definately knows how to make things bright! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Absolutely lovely. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Congrats you two for writing those beautiful words on pages blue. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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