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Finally Feel This
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Finally Feel This |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
Sitting here, thinking, wishing, hoping, coping, choking, I can’t breath. I love you, I hate you, I bait you, I throw you, I don’t know you, I don’t. I try to understand, you’re a man, I can, deal with that, but I can’t. Emotions are rolling, Calling, falling, stalling. I’m scared of the way I feel, And the way I don’t. I won’t call you back to my evil arms, My false alarms, my silent hell. You’re there already, you know it well. It’s not pretty, you’re yelling for help. I offer my hand, then pull it back, Slack, I never cut it for you. I’m sorry, I’m caddy, at times Not a lady, but maybe we could, Look through that, Get through that, We’ve tried, cried, Finally fried, we’re tired, Expired. I love you, I love you, I’m missing you, pissing you off. Taking you for granted. I see now, I do, I do not deserve you. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It sounds like someone has found a hellcat. In these days however, a man or a woman trying to provoke the other to respond would find her or him in court if they did. Good emotive writing capturing something that should be said. Dave |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
very nice |
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