Open Poetry #30 |
Silence Remains Unanswered |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Silence Remains Unanswered Your silence created despair It happens while I am waiting What reason could there be You stopped communicating Communication breakdowns Knowing silence is to blame You never kept your promise I had hoped you could explain Communication was our link With feelings freely exposed I kept you forever in thoughts Maybe your mind was closed It was meaningful in everyway Worthwhile and without regret Silence remains unanswered Why have you chosen to forget HopeĀ©2004 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You write so touchingly of this breakdown of communication, you make me feel your pain, dear Hope. I wish you to open a new channel of light and love. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ Fully understanding this one~ Am going to share with my daughter, as it reminded me of something she said recently, "I've given silence and gotten it in return." Nice to see you dear poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Margherita for your kind , caring reply Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Marge for your thoughtful understanding reply .... I shall send him the poem , maybe he will come up with some valid reason ... he usually does Hope |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow..this has such a wonderful flow to your words and so perfectly expressed. Great job! Eric |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you Eric , your kind comment is so much appreciated Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, at least he makes for some good poetry |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Dixie , yes this is true .... over 3,000 in the past 6 years , mostly about him !!believe it or not I had never written before , he's good for something LOL Hope |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hope, this poem really touched. It made me wonder whatever would I do if somtething happened to make it impossible for Gary and me to cummunicate when we are apart from each other. I don't think that I could stand it. Hugs to you, sweet lady Ethel |
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