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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-01-07 09:36 AM



Silence Remains Unanswered

Your silence created despair
It happens while I am waiting
What reason could there be
You stopped communicating

Communication breakdowns
Knowing silence is to blame
You never kept your promise
I had hoped you could explain

Communication was our link
With feelings freely exposed
I kept you forever in thoughts
Maybe your mind was closed

It was meaningful in everyway
Worthwhile and without regret
Silence remains unanswered
Why have you chosen to forget

HopeĀ©2004

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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-01-07 09:45 AM


You write so touchingly of this breakdown of communication, you make me feel your pain, dear Hope.
I wish you to open a new channel of light and love.
Love and hugs. Margherita


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2 posted 2004-01-07 09:54 AM


Hope~
Fully understanding this one~
Am going to share with my daughter, as it reminded me of something she said recently, "I've given silence and gotten it in return."

Nice to see you dear poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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HopeS
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3 posted 2004-01-07 09:57 AM


Thank you Margherita for your kind , caring reply

Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2004-01-07 09:59 AM


Thank you Marge for your thoughtful understanding reply .... I shall send him the poem , maybe he will come up with some valid reason ... he usually does

Hope

Ericc
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5 posted 2004-01-07 12:09 PM


Wow..this has such a wonderful flow to your words and so perfectly expressed. Great job!

Eric

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-01-07 12:18 PM


thank you Eric , your kind comment is so much appreciated

Hope

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7 posted 2004-01-07 12:31 PM


well, at least he makes for some good poetry
HopeS
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8 posted 2004-01-07 12:38 PM


Thanks Dixie , yes this is true .... over 3,000 in the past 6 years , mostly about him !!believe it or not I had never written before , he's good for something LOL
Hope

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9 posted 2004-01-07 05:53 PM


Hope, this poem really touched. It made
me wonder whatever would I do if somtething
happened to make it impossible for Gary and me to
cummunicate when we are apart from each other.
I don't think that I could stand it.
Hugs to you, sweet lady  
Ethel

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