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White silence |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 . The morning air carries the fragrance of snow, sparkling white beauty reflecting in my eyes. I plunge into this softness this myriad of snowflakes each a masterpiece of design beholding a vision of peace. My footprints across the field a friendly message to the sky. I am embraced by the woods, aware of my perfect solitude. My breath the only sound, I let beauty and silence enter and expand within and my heartbeats dance. I need not ask any questions All answers resonate in my heart, through the magnificence of nature I hear the Divine language of Love. Surrounded by infinite purity I stand in stillness and awe to Heaven I raise my voice, whispering words of praise. I touch upon the mystery of life Merging with the glittering light I am the snow, the sun, the sky One with the Source, I shine. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
nothing like the feel of being one with mother nature,,,,,,very sweet Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am the snow, the sun, the sky One with the Source, I shine. YES!  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Applause......Beautiful (zen-like) poem .....:-) especially here> "My breath the only sound, I let beauty and silence enter and expand within and my heartbeats dance." and here> "I touch upon the mystery of life Merging with the glittering light I am the snow, the sun, the sky One with the Source, I shine." (In actuality, this last stanza could stand as a poem by itself) Thanks for the loveliness......:-) ________ice ><> |
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xaos Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 35 |
I really like this one! Winter is a magical season, when the snow comes its like another world sometimes and its easy to escape from things. I wrote a sad poem in winter, the snow was there and everything was so beautiful, but i was so down I just couldn't see the magic and it never lifted my heart. I haven't seen the snow fall since sadly. Your poem makes me wish for snow  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ The beauty of this write will stand in my mind for a long, long time~ Softly bestowed beauty it is~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fill up your lungs with this song and this magic my friend. Awesome write. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is soft like the hush that surrounds the snow, beauitful and magical, graceful too |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
And you, dear girl, brought a piece of that feeling here and shared with all of us! Thank you! Enjoyed very much. |
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tainted_love123 Junior Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 11Australia |
What am i to say.. perfect |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooohhhh...so beautiful! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh how I love the overflowing quiet of a snow...it speaks so loudly of tranquility and newness...as does your poem and picture. Outstanding pictures you have painted here...thank you again and again...and good morning to ya. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Aahhhh Margherita....nobody captures the truest essence of beauty as you do. Love, Eric |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Beautiful... ~K~ |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Extraordinary write and photo...just like the author! Thank you, dear One! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
beautifully penned and photographed! what scent does snow have...perhaps a clean crisp purity, the odorless odor? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you my friends. You are all so kind and loving. VAS ... you know I was about to add CRISP air and FRESH fragrance .... because I DO detect the snow's fragrance and it is exactly what you say... it is uncontaminated purity ... Love to all. Margherita |
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