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Open Poetry #30

Awakening

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

0 posted 2004-01-07 12:37 PM

I could sit here like this all day
Sipping coffee and watching you smile
Pages of liturature strewn on the floor
and Lines of poetry doting the celeing
As we float suspended in the air
entrapted by this moment of simplicity
...Goodmorning

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-01-07 12:53 PM

Very pleasant thoughts.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-07 11:39 AM

good morning indeed,,,,few words,,huge impact,,,,i like it very much
Michelle

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-01-07 01:49 PM

Very intimate.

Captures a picture.

Dave

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

4 posted 2004-01-07 02:26 PM

thank you all very much for your kind words.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

5 posted 2004-01-07 03:58 PM

How very nicely wrapped. I love that sometimes the simplest thoughts are our deepest moments

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2004-01-07 05:58 PM

much passion shines through this....

~~**~~
This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

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