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White Sins |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As decadent as milk…uneven in a strapless cut that swirls the floor Around your knees, we walk the restless chatter of the room Mingling…meeting…brushing close in tight quarters Despite the smile upon my face, a warm demeanor There is only you completely filling my mind Dribbling on the edge of wine glass and kidskin Gloves just sheer enough to keep as new The hand withheld for you A fantasized collection Kept in hidden introspection Sampling the air a moments dare Chilling me to cover up Thoughts too good Your eyes recant The need I shan’t And gallantly To dance with me And hold me close Alone in the crowd Copyright Kkh 1/6/04 |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
This is great - I really liked it - Paul |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ma Ma Meeeuh, Whata speecie, spicy meatuh balla.... Well done Kid...very well done...sheesh... Where was that place? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow !! hugs, Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Kathleen....this is fantastic! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
felt like a whirl of love and then the softness of the embrace at the end, very sweet |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You're really shining with this one Diamond! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!! Eric |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is one fabulous write, you put me there! ~K~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Delicious! Makes me think of everything in a decidedly decadant mine-frame, while above all else, it was the least of all sins... What a good write, Kathleen! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write, as usual |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great pace this romantic race ... Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
so far . . . my favorite of yours, my friend. Loved ever picture your words created for me. jwesley |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This I love..... There is only you completely filling my mind Dribbling on the edge of wine glass and kidskin Gloves just sheer enough to keep as new ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Could here the music playing and glasses clinking, while stepping into your mind. You are simply elegant, and you took me there Kathleen~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...This had such an old fashioned sound to it...the dance a ball, rather then a dance..filled with atmesphere. Loved it! |
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