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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-01-06 06:25 AM



Passion I behold,
Love I taste on your lips
burning hot,

Whisper in loves breath,
sweet words perfumed
with a fragrant flower,

Blow gentle kisses unto thy cheeks,
let thy eyes weep at your love,

Gaze deeply into my eyes
as if it were your last
breath,

Passionately you bestow
upon me, your firey darts
of love,

Let my heart be penetrated
with loves flaming,
hot daggers

Loves poision has infected my heart,
pulsating rapidly throughout
my veins,

Bind my bodly tightly
with your arms,
so close, a heartbeat can be felt,

and a breath cannot escape...

Let our breath become one....

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2004-01-06 07:06 AM


The breath that you breathed yesterday is breath i breathe today....exhaled by you and your beautiful face....it is the sweetest breath that anybody could draw....it is a brilliant poem of depth and magnitude....it is a pleasure and comfort to have your love so deep....

Love Golderose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
2 posted 2004-01-06 07:24 AM


Man!  Your poem and Golden's response are beautiful.
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2004-01-06 09:50 PM


Thanks LngJhn....

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

SongVixen
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since 2003-07-06
Posts 43
England
4 posted 2004-01-06 09:52 PM


Breathtaking!
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2004-01-06 09:54 PM


Thanks Songvixen for your reply....

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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