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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-01-05 11:12 PM

Red and White Romance

The potion of vanilla and merlot, held curved wrist
Brought to lips blushed red in preamble, each second savored
Held back in full anticipation every luscious sipped sensation
So good

Organza droops off shoulder…off road…a little wild
Eyes shining effervescent of another taste
Such slight in this disoriented trace, sharing sips of ruby lips
Not too much

Stretched out upon a cloud of jubilance…giggles in the rain
A single glass, a single swallow and most amazing please
Curved against your hip, where wanders my most comfortable smile
Wine and Ice Cream

That keeps me on the sea of linen sheets and worthy treats
Content in moonlight drapes a coverlet to flutter dream-spent sighs
Where we spend pretend and buy the prize
So good

Copyright Kkh 1/5/04

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-01-06 02:13 AM

Don't know why I'm the first to post on this one!! I thought it was luscious!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-01-06 09:12 AM

Exquisite piece of writing!
Love, Margherita

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

3 posted 2004-01-06 09:16 AM

I've gotta agree, Diamond, this is pretty neat. One request - I was thinking, "What a great idea! Mix some vanilla extract in with the merlot!" You devil! I didn't realize you were talking about ICE CREAM! lol - Next time, give me a warning - eh?

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-01-06 09:24 AM

ThisDiamond,
Excellent, a keeper.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-01-06 09:55 AM

Kathleen~

'The potion of vanilla and merlot, held curved wrist
Brought to lips blushed red in preamble, each second savored'

Such originality in your thoughts~
Adored the lines above~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2004-01-06 05:28 PM

So,  wine and ice cream?  On a cold and
chilling evening?  Or perhaps in a warm
sauna....as she giggles lightly, from the
effects of too much ice cream....Yeah,
right!!

Cute one K.  Made me have a craving for
a few food stuffs....

xaos
Junior Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 35

7 posted 2004-01-06 06:42 PM

"That keeps me on the sea of linen sheets and worthy treats
Content in moonlight drapes a coverlet to flutter dream-spent sighs
Where we spend pretend and buy the prize
So good"

I love this verse in particular, theres something sultry and alive about the imagery. Really gives it feeling.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

8 posted 2004-01-06 06:45 PM

I did so enjoy this one, TD, though not a wine drinker...but vodka and ice cream? Me thinks not.

A great write.

Patricia

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