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Open Poetry #30

Love in the Key of Paint

wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2004-01-05 04:27 PM

we
merge our temperas
slather our papers
with bright colors
that mirror the things
that could come ahead
if we mixed our colors
what would they make
a hideous brown
or a more vibrant hue
something beautiful
a passionate color
rather than brown
ugly worthless color
if i mixed my own colors
and you yours
do you think it would
be beautiful
if we made them one
then slapped them –lovingly
of course—on virgin sheets of white
made a painting of our colors
that we mixed our own way
do you think it would
be beautiful

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

1 posted 2004-01-05 04:33 PM

so much goes into the colors of our lives - what a powerful question to ask if the combination of colors with another would be beautiful...something to ponder - loved your poem - Paul

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

2 posted 2004-01-05 04:34 PM

your poetry is very creative and different...thats prob why I like it so much, well done indead.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2004-01-05 04:36 PM

enjoyed

lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

4 posted 2004-01-05 04:38 PM

It's very creative so I'll spare you the sarcasm this time. Aren't you a lucky little Barbie? Make sure you get the minivan in the divorce. oops. was that sarcasm? still like the poem.

-Steph

wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

5 posted 2004-01-05 04:44 PM

Thanks Goodnknight, wintertao, vandana, and Steph.

-katie-

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