Open Poetry #30 |
Tonight... |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Our every touch is a question asked by the whispered stroke of fingers. There is patience found to the repeated measure of our asking. Yet still the questions fall between us as a silent wall of longing. Tonight...will we step beyond the confines of existence? Will the promise of our fingers lead to something more? Tonight...will we seek to know the limits of our senses? Nothing waits for our awareness. And your arms invite the subtle death of my restraint. Tonight...there is no need for us to answer. To simply ask - This alone may be enough. [This message has been edited by Ericc (01-04-2004 03:08 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a very beautiful poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
so true, that the questions are better left unasnwered,,,,,let alone asked,,,very nice Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Eric! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
sensual poetry that leaves it to the read to be explicit - enjoyed the read - Paul |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Eric... Sometimes I truly do not have the words to express how your love songs affect my soul...so, simply thank you for all that you are and all that you share. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Melting over here. Patricia |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sensual...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Eric, this is a masterpiece. Those questioning fingers reach far ... Our senses will surface from the secret labyrinth where we confined them, in fear of drowning in the unlashed flood of passion’s drive. Mystery’s track keeps me yearning tonight … relax into my open arms, we shall explore immensity on waves of light …tonight. You inspire. I love you. Margherita |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Wow, this is breathlessly beautiful. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful. TD |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
To simply ask - This alone may be enough'''' Sigh....you do inspire! ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous piece! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~your words are intoxicating... ~ARH Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Tonight ... had to read this one again, such a delight! I love you. Margherita |
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