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wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2004-01-05 03:24 PM

if i were a book
would you read me
fondling each of my pages
with your wicked eyes
tracing my words
with your lips
letting them flow
like saliva off your tongue
and into thin air
openly acknowledging
your love for me

if i were a movie
would you watch me
absorb every piece of me
laugh at my jokes
weep at the sad bits
examine every piece of me
until i am real to you
be astonished by my surprises
that are yet to be revealed
hidden in my action-masked depths

if i were a song
would you sing me
my lyrics dripping obscenely
off of your tongue
a sweet melodious serenade
love songs lost in the
pillows of your cheeks
shout me out from the rooftops

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2004-01-05 03:30 PM

I see how your come by your name- tis' a most tasty write, would make a great song.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2004-01-05 03:35 PM

"if i were a song
would you sing me
my lyrics dripping obscenely
off of your tongue"

Gotta tell ya...I loved this piece and the lines above were over the top..loved it.

Great job!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-01-05 03:40 PM

Yes, your words are to the edge, but not
quite over the top. You do write "wickedbeautifulpoetry",
I must say.

Hugs

Ethel

lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

4 posted 2004-01-05 04:24 PM

my lyrics dripping obscenely
off of your tongue

^---katie. i would do this, but u know, i already got the drooling problem under control. should have written this sooner. hehe.

-Steph

wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

5 posted 2004-01-05 04:27 PM

thanks guys!

-katie-

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-01-06 03:17 AM

Its a good possibility...James

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2004-01-06 10:36 AM

your poetry bring wonderful vivid and exciting images to mind and some "wicked" smiles - paul

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2004-01-06 11:48 AM

this one lets your mind wander where it wants, but , brings you back to where the auther wants you to be,,,edgy and good, much enjoyed,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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