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An End to the Seasons
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An End to the Seasons |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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A new season has begun The winters frost Has stifled an ugly growth The warmth of your words And heart bringing a thaw To the frozen tundra of my anger The world seems different No longer do I ponder The unfairness of what was Knowing that what was Made what is That who I am now Is what you love Spring comes early To those lucky enough To find a kindred soul I feel the warmth Of the sun as I turn my face Towards you And the heat of our love Winter no longer exist "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Spring comes early To those lucky enough To find a kindred soul I feel the warmth Of the sun as I turn my face Towards you And the heat of our love Winter no longer exist " WOW!!! IWIHWT!!! Beautiful Susan...wonderful writing. I feel warmer already! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
The world seems different No longer do I ponder The unfairness of what was Knowing that what was Made what is That who I am now Is what you love Susan, this is exactly how my Love and I feel. You said it so beautifully!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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EverRuss Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 66Indiana |
Great poem. I can easily see myslef being warmed by its words when im down If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
It is amazing that we can still find different words to describe the same feelings. Well done my dear |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This poem is beautiful. It begs for response. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Knowing that what was Made what is That who I am now Is what you love That perspective is long in coming... but makes every step of the path worth it, doesn't it? *S* Excellent write!! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Nancy~Thank you!  Ethel~Yes, I know you know.  Russell~Thank you mucho! Terring~Thank you! Michael~What can I say? Thank you.. Suthern~Yes, it was and it is. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful. The season of love is the THE season! Love, Margherita  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I have always enjoyed the parallel usage of seasons and love....they blend so well, as does this piece...Thanx Susan. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
susan your words are very touching...h |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I liked this alot...I also think the whole of S2 could be cut, and you would have a stronger poem. Read it aloud w/o s2, nice. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you everyone. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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