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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Hearing voice gesture a superb dialogue Less pretentious, enlarging personifications It is the lesser day so smoothly natural, examining life Stuffed with unparalleled expression To keep in mind, like my CD player Where description carries feelings Over and over again...ahhhh, listening to Josh Groben! Oh that I learn to define, on the face of freshmen What self-exploration soaked in time? How amazing How brilliant and loving from the greatest source Metaphor derives from experience Crying for the loss of it, between the meanings…then Swallowing everything that Socrates analyzed Smelling mortal position and youth changing Repetition at the end of impromptu Giving friendly unity interweaving inspiration To remember both sides of my hand Are what we think with, oh the free-fire zone Borrowed clothing told me much better Where stories became truer with less detail Spinning through the air Doors open wearing white maxi-coats Prolific beauty argues the wildest possible extensions Dramatic literature and internal surprise Reflections move at the speed of light Matter determines our manners Or it should~ White sounds bobbing, scarcely more than a heavy-twilled rippling Waiting for two thirds of our thoughts Viewing God’s eternal acceptance, reading love Mainstreamed throughout long beards of men Forging accounts for arguments Road repair programs are accelerated We confide to our diaries Where continual autobiography lives And confronts that mass of experiences Whispering Behold! Where the spirit floats we live! And we tell old friends what we did Crushed and reprocessed The potential belongs to you The challenges of new A most exciting familiarity, consistently enlarging spheres Family quarrels are bitter things Heaven is chasing me With creative courage Being part of the tone of honesty Of openness inserting harmonic all-inclusive couplets If we just forget to enjoy our fears |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! What a fantastic write! Your words are packed full of truth and insight into the open heart of creativity. Thank you for sharing this piece that will find a warm place in my library. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, "If we just forget to enjoy our fears" You are a gifted writer.  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nicely done |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
LeeJ, This sent my head spinning with thought! Sadelite |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ Such a joy to read your poetic thoughts~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"Reflections move at the speed of light" ... Indeed! You are a waterfall of inspiration. Love, Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Wow! that one took away my breath in more ways than one.. enjoyed.....:-) _______ice ><> |
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