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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-01-05 12:24 PM



I fail
to see the need
for anything but sleep
as it has taken hold, pulling me
eyes closing, mind stalling and so it is
I fail

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-01-05 12:25 PM


I know how that feels...makes me want to go back to bed
wintertao
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2 posted 2004-01-05 02:43 PM


very nice, been there....
Terrina
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3 posted 2004-01-05 03:14 PM


Sleeping is grand. The life I live in my dreams is so much more me than the life I live in reality.

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4 posted 2004-01-05 03:30 PM


OhMzWynterGal~
Nap ... nap ... nap ... my FAVORITE time of day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

LngJhnAg
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5 posted 2004-01-05 04:12 PM


Alllllll right, Mo - Is Balladeer or Toe there with you?  I can't imagine a better excuse for nodding off as soon as possible.  lol
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-01-05 04:12 PM


ahhhhh...now I feel better

at the tail end of this flu...all that's left is tiredness and the need to catch up on sleep

thanks for the responses
hugs
M

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2004-01-05 04:25 PM


well I can assure you JohnBoy, that if either was here I would not and they would not be nodding off

M

vandana
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8 posted 2004-01-05 04:32 PM


enjoyed
GG
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9 posted 2004-01-05 09:12 PM


I know this one sooo well!
Without sleep life just isn't any good...
sometimes it is as much of a need as a surgery...
well said.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2004-01-05 11:00 PM


zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

it is nice to catch some now and then and just feel that dreamy bliss

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2004-01-06 10:24 AM


Vandana, Alyssa and Michel,thanks.

Yes I need that nap and more... gaining back  what was lost.

~smiling
M

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