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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Revelries Revelries shadows flow my head Almonry of the living and dead Vibrations that bow across my heart Those of the end middle and start. Spirits and phantoms dance in the field Sadness and smiles bouquet the yield Agony and ecstasy spun Into the fantasy of one And captured in the gay of gray I blindly feel and Braille my way Into the rhythm of the rhyme The raining of the sands of time And I tear in this dust of rain With a palette of joy and pain Brushing with a brush of goal Apply the paint within my soul. Letting the knife of early dawn Bring life to the dew of morn |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya Sy, Hapy New Year...I believe out of all your wonderful writings, this one is my fav...thanks for writing and sharing, and have a great day. Hugs and smiles Lee J. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write Sy! Great read for a cold and snowy morn. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are kind but I love it.  Nancy, Hugs and tea, love it.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And captured in the gay of gray I blindly feel and Braille my way Into the rhythm of the rhyme The raining of the sands of time And I tear in this dust of rain With a palette of joy and pain Brushing with a brush of goal Apply the paint within my soul. ~*~ That's it in a nutshell! Good morning, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You eat the nut and discard the shell. Thank you |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Spirits and phantoms dance in the field Sadness and smiles bouquet the yield Agony and ecstasy spun Into the fantasy of one Such wonderful words to begin a dreary Monday. Thankyou Seymour. Cinnamon toast with your tea? hugs, Chris  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, I think this is my favorite one of yours, too! It will linger. In this one, I read the message first, not the beautiful rhythm and sound the way I usually do. Whether or not it's my favorite, all your poetry is divine. Sadelite |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Cinnamon toast will be fine. Sadelite You are kind thank you dear. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, So are you. |
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