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Open Poetry #30

Teary eyed Moon

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-01-06 11:27 PM

one lone tear
stains an aloof sky

the moon is forlorn
tonight

you have gone cold
on me

i turn my head
away from you now
burying it into
the missing moon

i promised myself
i wouldn't let
you see me cry

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-07-2004 04:51 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2004-01-06 11:57 PM

Enjoyed...James

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-01-07 01:10 AM

Michele, this one hurts.

Hugs to you

Ethel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-07 01:24 AM

ouch.......very sad. hugs to you.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

4 posted 2004-01-07 08:41 AM

I can shed a tear or 2 myself. Sad but good

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2004-01-07 04:46 PM

What an idea, inkedgoddess! Awesome, this missing moon where you bury your face ...
Love and hugs. Margherita

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2004-01-07 04:47 PM

enjoyed

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2004-01-07 11:37 PM

thank guys and dolls, u all make me smile

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2004-01-08 03:41 AM

Wow.......... just wow.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-01-08 05:38 AM

yeah..sad but beautiful

Youngatheart
Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

10 posted 2004-01-08 06:00 AM

oh my.....so sad

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2004-01-08 06:52 AM

thanks again for reading and always so glad when you all stop by

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