Open Poetry #30 |
Once Sweet Dreams And Champagne Breakfasts |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
The message came at Noon today; they told me you were dead. I'd always thought outliving you would liberate me, instead I find the binding tighter. Perhaps it's primate grief some quaint old fashioned chemistry, a Hominid reaction to knowing of the dead ignoring the release. I'll never know the where or how, or what you'd lately been about; they simply said time had run out, but that blade cuts two ways. Tomorrow I will think some more I pace myself these days. ©2004 by icebox |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox....It seems that death is hardest on the living. Hugs! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is very true. Surviving is harder. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know this well love the ending lines |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Icy~ I know exactly what you mean. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I loved the title you chose for this~ without death , how can we appreciate life~ I once watched a movie where one person wanted to live forever and they got their wish...but it was a curse instead of a blessing...they lived while watching the one and ones they love die~ ~hugs to you ~ARH Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-05-2004 02:16 PM).] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I've recently come to know that death isn't the end - we merely perceive it to be so. How much harder to watch those left behind take so many wrong turns and have so many wrong thoughts than for us to merely feel sad at their passing and miss them for what in the grand scheme of things must be a short time. Yes, I often tell myself that tomorrow is time enough to think but then there are other things to think about. At the end just one big jumble of thoughts with no conclusion. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sir, you have addressed the most difficult situation. It's about forgiveness isn't it? As always, your words are wise and gifts to us. |
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