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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-01-04 07:13 PM

Steel Blue...Whispers

Like a flower
unfolding,
swollen thoughts
wet with rain
worked between
the softened kisses
of a touch once felt,
inspiring the old in me
to become new again.

Smiles rising to the occasion,
tears adding to the memories.
But the laughing felt good
and the whispers enticed,
as the hidden thoughts
were exposed
to the more of you.

I left you my soft sighs
and from these once velvet eyes,
words that held a meaning
only known to the two of us.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-01-04 07:18 PM

Beautifully penned, Maureen.
Melancholic and very touching.
Love, Margherita

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2004-01-04 07:53 PM

yes a bit of melancholy but so well done - I enjoyed it - Paul

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-01-04 07:57 PM

Oh so beautiful Maureen...
softly penned.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2004-01-04 08:00 PM

I left you my soft sighs
and from these once velvet eyes,
words that held a meaning
only known to the two of us.

Oh yes, Maureen, we both have those kind
of words, too. If others heard me and him
talking at times, they wouldn't know what we're talking about....but we do!

Hugs

Ethel

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

5 posted 2004-01-04 08:47 PM

How beautiful. The title pulled me in from the start and the whole thing kept me interested. A wonderful write.
*Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2004-01-04 09:46 PM

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-01-05 02:42 AM

the romantic you...I like it

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2004-01-05 10:01 AM

Margherita, just a touch of remembrance...

Paul, thank you for enjoying

Nancy, inspiration is everywhere

Ethel, these are more of the "private kind"
Thanks
M

Thank you Allison, sometimes just thinking about the past can bring up the happier thoughts. I am glad you stopped by.

Chris, I try to be romantic,

doesn't always work that way.

hugs all
M

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-01-05 02:24 PM

HeyLiLBuddy~
I LOVE it !!!!!
*HUglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2004-01-05 02:32 PM

"swollen thoughts
wet with rain"

I loved those two lines....well done!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2004-01-05 05:13 PM

Glad you love it Marge

Thanks Susan...

I get my inspiration wherever I can, this one came unexpectedly

M

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2004-01-05 09:14 PM

That's special Maureen~

ooops I think my ten minutes are up!

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-05-2004 09:53 PM).]

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