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wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2004-01-04 07:10 PM

you once whispered
as silently as the wind
into my ear
that you loved me

that whisper withered
into something i could feel
but not know for sure
like the presence of the wind

your love for me
has faded into the sunshine
of summer
as wind dies down in heat

[This message has been edited by wickedbeautifulpoetry (01-05-2004 03:15 PM).]

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-01-04 07:13 PM

please check your email

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-01-05 09:33 AM

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2004-01-06 02:30 AM

Amazing how the way things were can hurt, and this was nicely done to show it.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-01-06 08:37 AM

"that whisper withered
into something i could feel
but not know for sure
like the presence of the wind"

very good comparison,,,,,,you can feel the wind caress you and ease away,,,as you can feel the whisper of love on your heart then sense it die,,,,,,,i like your poem
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

5 posted 2004-01-06 08:46 AM

This poem deserves to be read slowly, with a lot of thought. You hit it so well, WBP. There is definitely a message here.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-01-06 10:11 AM

Katie~
Heartfelt emote~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-01-06 10:35 AM

I actually feel this love has grown ...
that is what it conveys to me. From silent whispers to heat of passion ...
I don't know. But your write is intriguing.
Love, Margherita

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

8 posted 2004-01-06 10:49 AM

always a powerful message in your poetry - you write it so well - Paul

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2004-01-06 05:42 PM

please check your email and respond to me or any moderator of your choice! 1-6-04

~~**~~
This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

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