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Open Poetry #30

Letting Go

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-01-04 03:29 PM

Speaking to the trees
They answered back from a green leafy darkness
Where trees talk to men
Where fear need not exist
Every branch lay in movement
Remembering unfinished conversation
Pulling on wool socks and warm shirts
They become as we…life embraces like mittens
Whispering some good-byes
Descending from hidden places
And, after a long silence
I knew that a piece of my life was over

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

1 posted 2004-01-04 03:54 PM

very interesting introspection and then some finality - loved it - Paul

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-01-04 03:56 PM

This poem speaks a lot of truth. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

3 posted 2004-01-04 04:21 PM

Very deep and moving and so appreciated. Thank you.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2004-01-07 10:59 AM

Extraordinary.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2004-01-07 01:38 PM

wow, very moving
~K~

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