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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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come. in. the inner circle is dark but warm… my rime is yours to melt tears hands paved in rhythm writhe-cadence twisted in swindle knit. yes a line can smile the way of a corner deception has so many faces of innocence i but you don’t know. this is such crap, i can't write single decent word. [This message has been edited by pandonov (11-26-2003 01:01 AM).] |
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Fire Fairy Junior Member
since 2003-10-22
Posts 43Australia |
a line can smile the way of a corner Beautiful. It is not crap! It is deep and it struck a chord within me. I love your style. Keep letting your rhythm flow.  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Deception has so many faces of innocence... thats gotta be my favorite part. I love this.. keep writing, you're good. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like you could use some inspiration...I like all your stuff, whether I understand it right away or not...keep spitting the words out for us |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh yes you can! I admire your style -- you're utterly unique in the way you say things....that's why you're on my "Read Now" list.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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