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mara marti Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 10Chicago, Illinois |
Hiding from what others know to be real Crying at night people ask what's the deal? Taking chances even though i'm afraid Life is never fair it's all just a game Hiding from the truth, lies stacking up Continuing to fall, everything's so tough Hollow walls and thin layers of blood Frozen heart, I'm over, I'm done Please save me before I take my life away Cause I can't bare this I can't take all this pain and I'm sorry I didn't want to break anyones heart But I'm lonely and broken apart. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Mara... This is a beautiful and touching verse even though it is so very sad. You have a very nice style...welcome to Passions. I think you'll like it here. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions, Mara Marti. This is an excellent place to come for emoting. A sad write, yet broken hearts have been the theme of many, many poetic offerings since the beginning of poetry. I hope you enjoy your stay here, and the variety of writings this site has to offer.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are really not alone...there are plenty of us that know how this feels |
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