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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-01-03 08:21 PM


The Sounds of Bliss

As she finished playing her cello for me,
I told her there were only a few things
more beautiful then the sound of her cello.
"What would they be?" she said to me.
"One would be the pleasure of hearing
my name roll from your luscious lips.
Two would be your warm words of
encouragment, as I caress your silky
skin with my eager fingertips.
And three would be the sweet sounds
of bliss as we softy kiss."
Laying her cello aside, she whispered
my name, placed my hand on her thigh,
and gave me a soft delicious kiss.
It's a beautiful sound, the sound of bliss.

JamesLee
January03
2004



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Startime55
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1 posted 2004-01-03 08:27 PM


Filled with sensual passion...*sigh* written to vibrate the true sounds of bliss...

jaicie114
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2 posted 2004-01-03 11:19 PM


Yeah...::sigh::

This is my new favorite of yours!  You're good...you're really good...thank you!

Love and Light...jc


This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

[This message has been edited by jaicie114 (01-03-2004 11:19 PM).]

wickedbeautifulpoetry
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3 posted 2004-01-04 12:00 PM


This is a beautiful poem, it really captures a scene filled with passion and such. Very lovely!

-Katie

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4 posted 2004-01-04 05:01 AM


sweet!
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5 posted 2004-01-04 12:17 PM


Oh yes, JamesMichael~
SIGH~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Ericc
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6 posted 2004-01-04 12:48 PM


Very, very nice...!!!

Eric

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