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Open Poetry #30

Life without you Had

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-01-03 03:53 PM

moments captured in simplicity,
a hunger filled with captivity.
quietly lingering at the tips of my heart.
mumbling and groaning for a way out.

of my mind,
I can't hide,
within these glimses.
Of life within you had.

Tearing open the wounds of a subtle heart.
Shattered upon a tranquil glass scene.
Blessed with memories,
lingered deep within

Of my mind,
I can't fathom,
without these glipses,
of life without you had

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2004-01-03 05:23 PM

very nice

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-01-04 04:09 PM

This is some deep poetry but I still liked it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

3 posted 2004-01-04 04:31 PM

That was an inspiring deep write Kellie. Sincerity was tributed to each word and the depths of your hearts passion evolved so well through each word. Thank you.

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