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Your Music
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Your Music |
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lovejunkie Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 93Indiana |
Your Music On a rose-colored pedestal you sit Comfortable yet? Wrapped in the robes of admiration I can’t touch you… Like a wise stone you lay An old soul wrapped in generations You know what you want I’ll try to be that someday Another morning and again I fail Snapping out of a dream is the saddest sound for a broken heart The kisses were so real But you’re still so far away The moon and stars would never please you A restless nomad in a stable life Surrounded by things you don’t want And given nothing you need Music is all I want to be So close to the heart, so ready in the mind Able to cure any wound, ease any pain Get off the stage and sing to me The lights are dim and the ghosts enjoy the show The snap is coming The worst sound in the world… |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"Snapping out of a dream is the saddest sound for a broken heart" nice way with words |
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wickedbeautifulpoetry Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 84Indiana, USA |
I always liked this one Stephy! Sad sad, but lovely writing. -katie- |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you sing a said but poignant song here - lovely poem - Paul |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sadness of waking from a dream is felt very strongly....To be lost in the music of the dream the desired goal....Wonderful writing... |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
music can calm the savage beast,,,,,but, sometimes,,it can keep alive the savaged soul Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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MexicoCityBlues Junior Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 48The Point of Know Return |
hmmm...this is so real...It's like when I read it, I get the feeling that it's about me...hang in there! "The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye. The story of love is Hello and Goodbye. Until we meet again..." -Jimi Hendrix |
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