Open Poetry #30 |
Chaos |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Chaos reigns in most people's life Sometimes chaos takes over And life itself becomes A total living hell When chaos takes over You hurt the people you love And you care for So do not let chaos Reign in your life For it is too soon For it to be over Cold hands means a warm heart |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Chaos reigns and rains Merging fiction with fact Stimulating adrenaline Guesting history Pressure or stress. I like the words, the like the thoughs I'm sorry you didn't take it's effects deeper. Liked it Dave |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I know too well the effects of chaos. It's entered and ruled my life, but it can't beat the true power inside me. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Hello Julie Good write.I have taken uo the idea of writing a poem on Chaos, called Chaos or Order to describe some of my sentiments. Guess that in this world there ought to be a balance... Martin [This message has been edited by wordwizard (01-04-2004 04:31 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Thank you for your replies. And Martin I shall read the poem you speak of once it is written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Ever too often does the shame and agony get under ones fingernails and lets the cancer overwhelm them, dearest friend, the true remedy is to smile and soon enough all will be calm again! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true comfort to all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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