Open Poetry #30 |
Minerva, the Garden Spider |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Minerva, the Garden Spider she tatted lace with style and grace across the arbored way then sat right down with nary frown and waited for her prey patience was her virtue as she silently lay for knitting there yet most aware she planned for later days tiny socks of spider silk a layette filled with spider’s milk was the goal that kept her sane eating for a multitude filled her with much gratitude when flies and gnats came out to play the luscious hoard sated well her gourd and brought glory to her day ©January 3, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
No fair maiden, your Minerva, but she's filling out her destiny in great style. Love, joyce |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
this is very cool.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well suits her the name Minerva. She is trusting in her talents. And the goddess inspired you beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You have spun a wonderful tale.... I especially liked the tiny sox. Just goes to show, there is much to be said for a game plan! Really nice write~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is... wonderfull Would make a gret childrens book : ) ~~ Connie ~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
VAS -- I'm always so happy to read poems depicting the miracles of this world, and nature. Enjoyed this mucho! |
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