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xela
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since 2004-01-03
Posts 13


0 posted 2004-01-03 06:00 AM


Falling flight on unpracticed wings
Feeling through the dark.
Heart and mind screaming seperate things
Desperate for a spark.
To feel dirt under foot,
But wind on my face.
To establish my roots,
But get outta this place.
Stretch my wings and grow strong,
Hold my own.
Grow into me,
And into the unknown.

© Copyright 2004 xela - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-01-03 06:35 AM


Hi Xela,

Grow into me,
And into the unknown.


it's the only way.

Welcome to passions! Please check your email for a special greeting.

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant


Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-01-03 07:05 AM


To feel dirt under foot,
But wind on my face.
To establish my roots,
But get outta this place.

~*~

The stretch of need...
reminds me that you can run,
but you can't hide...

when all is before you.  Enjoyed this.  Welcome to Passions!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-01-03 07:32 AM


we all have to do that eventually...but the unknown is always out there.

Welcome
M

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2004-01-03 08:19 AM


Very beautiful first post. Welcome to Passions.

Love, Margherita

Greeneyes
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2004-01-03 09:35 AM


Hi, and Welcome to Passions.  We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

please check your email for a special greeting


Kindly

Greeneyes~

~~**~~
This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,  
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2004-01-03 09:45 AM


xela
Welcome and enjoyed the write.

Nightshade
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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
7 posted 2004-01-03 10:10 AM


Welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed your first post!
Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
8 posted 2004-01-03 10:12 AM


Enjoyed your first post.
Welcome to Passions.
ThisDiamond

garysgirl
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Florida, USA
9 posted 2004-01-03 10:26 AM


xela, I enjoyed your first post. I look
forward to reading more of your work.
And, welcome to Passions.
Hugs  
Ethel

Midnitesun
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Gaia
10 posted 2004-01-03 11:10 AM



I loved this first offer from your pen.

WELCOME to Passions!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
11 posted 2004-01-03 01:20 PM


it's so hard to know whether to stay or go, to nest or fly

Welcome to Passions!


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
12 posted 2004-01-03 04:54 PM


Welcome to Passions! This is
so wonderful...truly a beautiful
first post, and full of so much
wisdom. I know you'll going to love
it here, enjoy your time, and write,
it helps one continue to grow!

Take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Juju
Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
13 posted 2004-01-03 05:15 PM


auh life...

Problems and hardships are every where, you can't hide, but you can redifine your self to adapt and survive the "winds" of life.

I enjoyed your poem. lovely.

Juju

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
14 posted 2004-01-03 05:18 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I very much enjoyed your first post.
Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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