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Open Poetry #30

Until Now

mfchild
New Member

since 2003-12-28

Posts 6
NYC

0 posted 2004-01-02 02:43 PM

Until Now

My love for you
is stained in my skin
like a lovers tatoo
and even though I'm branded
only iknow how i feel 4 u
from the first time
i laid my eyes on u
Venus whispered in my ear
and when i turned to my left
Cupid's arrows were coming at me
through the air
later that night
on my knees I asked God
for a second opinion
he said she's the one 4 u
u won't find a better friend
or companion

Never have I had such beauty
at arms reach
never imagined such beauty
could be diggin me
never once before
did all the others dissapear
until now
until now

Let me blindfold u
and listen 2 my voice
touch my hand
and u will understand
tthat my love 4 u is not
an everday compliment
embrace the thought of us
be intrigued by the fact
that cupid was heaven sent
i'll breath sweet words
in your ear
while nibbling on your neck
yeah i know ur ticklish
but baby what the heck
i want u to giggle
from the pleasures
we both are encountering
and let me figure out
why u got me singing

Never have I had such beauty
at arms reach
never imagined such beauty
could be diggin me
never once before
did all the others dissapear
until now
until now
without pause

lyrics by: Paris Mark Toon 4 ButterScotch Blue publishing © www.butterscotchblue.com

chrissydome
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 73
germany

1 posted 2004-01-02 02:53 PM

this is love at it's purest! great poetry!

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

2 posted 2004-01-02 03:09 PM

This was quite a splendid piece, nice flow and heartfelt words;Very natural and unforced words, I enjoyed.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2004-01-02 04:07 PM

thats love

love is beautiful....

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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