Open Poetry #30 |
Flowing Inside My Dream |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Flowing Inside My Dream Catch my dreams in flight To meet much the same Where a love light shines As I whispered your name Pursuing love tenderness In touch , taste sensations Sense whispered longing Follow dream destinations Inviting pillow talk passion Kiss where offerings flow In granting your every wish Loving pleasures I bestow Trace along soft silky satin Into rapturous new heights Flowing inside my dreams Inside those liquid delights Hope ©2003 |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love this...bravo! An excellent piece of writing this morning. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice to see you this way |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey thank you EvocativeVerse2 so pleased you enjoyed Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey thanks dixie , yes its amazing what thoughts can do Hope |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh dear Hope, that's a nice flutter dance and a pretty dreamy dream you're having. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you Bluesy , they were my first dreamy thoughts of two thousand and four , I do hope there will be more Hope |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, Hope. And, congratulations on your "Poem Of The Week" at the other site. Hugs Ethel |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Ethel for your kind reply , hey I did not know about the poem being POTW until your told me Hope |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, I started not to mention it. Now, I'm glad that I did!! Hugs, sweet lady Ethel |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks again Ethel , yes it must be a poetry site that does not let the poet know by email , hey how were you able to bump me back up here LOL Hope |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
oooOOOOHHHHhhh! Hope, this is about as close as I can read to X-rated! Really lovely! |
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EverRuss Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 66Indiana |
Absolutly beautiful hope..I feel you're pain and you're in my thoughts and prayers. I just recently part from someone who i spent the most romantic week with. I really dunno what to do...this sounds weird lol but hope what would you do (taking advice from my elders) Russell |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well your muse certainly is bringing in the New Year in style, lovely Hope, and Happy New Year! A Very Happy New Year To You and Yours! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Senually beautiful, Hope...your dream flows with passion...I love it... |
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