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wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2004-01-02 09:05 AM



Indecision
Theres a path off of the road
Indecision
Wonder where it might go

Sometimes your life just rolls along
Like a truck with a heavy load
And then one day out of the blue
Your standing next to someone new

I have heard you try to tell me
About the dreams you keep inside
But in the corners of your eyes
Are the other ones you try to hide

I have felt your Indecision
When my arms are around you
Your not sure where this may go
Directions aren't that clear I know

Indecision
Theres a path off of the road
Indecision
Walk with me We'll take it slow
Indecision
So many things I want to know
About You


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-01-02 11:31 AM


very neat write
Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-01-02 12:35 PM


to say making decisions isn't easy,,,is the understatement of the eon. when you know,,,and feel it is the right way to go,,and they dont follow easily,,,,you start to doubt yourself,,,sometimes,,it takes time to trust that leap,,faith isnt enough,,,,but, in the end,,if its good and true,,,the path led,,will be with you
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

jaicie114
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3 posted 2004-01-02 12:41 PM


Great write, wintertao...I think you've touched on the essence of truth in so many phases...unfortunately. I sincerely wish we could all live from a place of pure love and openness...but, then...I'm just a hopeless romantic.  Thank you for this.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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