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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Transformations Moving from room to room Stirring…and un-negotiated luring Restless Breathless The smolder holds no warmth Flames that were refused me Fire burns and soon consumes me Pacing to the window, to the door Mistaken in the crumbs I waited for Moonlight on crisp white Howling in my soul Drawing in the solstice knoll Taking me…an unrelenting plea Until I break To silver soft and shadow Paws that barely break upon the snow Turning me to hunt the midnight glow And through the glass my spirits pass Hungry and free A shadow called the night A wandered passage; mystery Copyright Kkh 1/1/04 |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
This could have been written by my wife putting up with me again. Talent. Words, Feeling - Do it. Explore and teach the world that there is more to life than a creaking floor, paced. Dave |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A shadow called the night A wandered passage; mystery Kathleen, this does have a mysterious feel to it. I like it.  Hugs  ethel |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Turning me to hunt the midnight glow And through the glass my spirits pass Hungry and free A shadow called the night A wandered passage; mystery Outstanding in so many ways, TD. Goodness you're good... Patricia |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I waited to see another's comment before being the first to post here because I wasn't real sure in what I gleaned from it... I liked it much, but what I saw (overall) was a kitty cat wanting to go outside - wonder if maybe that was sparked by Muska rubbing against my leg when I read it?? Anyway...don't know why I waited...told you the truth anyway...duh! Enjoyed this as I always do when reading your stuff, my friend. jwesley |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The pacing feline, whether cat or woman... waiting. Such an intense moment that could be...or is. Well expressed K. You are rollin' in the new year. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Until I break To silver soft and shadow Paws that barely break upon the snow ~*~ What lines! Thank you, Kathleen! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this just feels like michael my cat of his days in the sun, as a hunter, watchig the window now, living life, fat and pampered while the world has gone by him now and i felt the desire here in this piece loud and clear |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write....I like it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ You ALWAYS write to perfection~ 'Moonlight on crisp white' Oh my ... oh my~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Until I break To silver soft and shadow Ooooo, thats so pretty Kathleen. Enjoyed the mystery and touch of magic in this. As always~ |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Wow, TD... This is one of the most intense pieces I've ever read...thank you! You can just sink into the emotions you express. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
I love this poem. Poetry with big words, sometimes isolates me. Not because I don't understand them, but because, in todays world, we are sometimes talking at an 8th grade level, and to come here and see so much intelligence...we'll it's a shocker. |
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