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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-01 12:47 PM


Most times I feel the surge of your understanding penetrating floors
Things I - those complexity levels changing a heated stove to a chilled complex self-heated argument

The hearing of you
The sense of you
The URHHH of you

Kicking out the

"I am deleted the words of the words I never wrote to save someone some time

"Remains of an early morning cow excusing herself"

Of an argument I never want to win
And you never want to lose
Clinging onto someone
YOu thought was no good
In the Ice banded legs of a short sharp shock

Perhaps all we need
Is the Kommissar next door
Ensuring your complete package
And availablity

Dave

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Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2004-01-01 02:51 PM


Dave,,,,
did that happen in cornflakes?
deep
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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2 posted 2004-01-01 02:57 PM


No

Reality is always present.

I live in world of a lady I love and parrots.

Puddy hears me move and knows where I am at any time.

Jean hears Puddy.

I try not to get too near the Birds.

Puddy who'se gone would listen for my car.

I cant take that and I wont ever bond to a Blue and Gold Parrot again.

Dave

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3 posted 2004-01-01 03:02 PM


I answered your comments
One thing I didn't answer

Is Stalalist Control freak called a Chancellor and the other would adopt Stanilisism if it would buy him votes.

I went through the church stuff and honesty made me refuse the final words.

I knew however the difference between Churches.

Blair doesn't.

Dave

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4 posted 2004-01-01 03:19 PM


I dig it,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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5 posted 2004-01-01 03:59 PM


I wrote the reality behind something I wanted to write.

I do break away and lead a simpler life when I can.

I suppose I love words, I love images and I want so much to say this is something we should look at it.

Dave

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6 posted 2004-01-01 04:50 PM


reality is in the eye of the beholder,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Terrina
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7 posted 2004-01-01 05:23 PM


Dave, you have a way with even the deleted words;-)
Can't wait to read more

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8 posted 2004-01-02 01:26 PM


Brilliant!!
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9 posted 2004-01-02 08:15 PM


Love this, I look forward to reading more from you Dave

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant


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10 posted 2004-01-02 08:24 PM


What do I say

I get stroppy
I waffle
And find I still dont understand

Dave

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