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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-01-01 11:41 AM

Slipping into Freud

Funny how words can trickle down
without giving them too much thought.
And those slips so sheer I often wear,
decorated sometimes with naught.

Clinging they are, until released
from lips that hold desire.
Freud would be so proud of me
in all of my attire.

Influenced not easily,
I encore when in demand.
So wonderful when feeling up
in Freudian slippers, grand.

A part of me that shyness holds,
through words can be expressed.
But only in the written text
do I become undressed.

Yes, Freud would be confused by me
if ever met, it seems.
So I will keep my fantasies
to "slipping into dreams."

M

*playing with words*

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

garysgirl

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1 posted 2004-01-01 12:29 PM

And, Maureen, you can "play with words"
as well as anyone I know!!

Very good writing, as always, my friend.
Hugs,

Ethel

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-01-01 12:39 PM

this is very clever....awesome write! very cool!

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-01-01 12:39 PM

thanks Ethel, I made/someone made a Freudian slip the other day and I thought what a good title or theme.

hugs
M

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2004-01-01 12:52 PM

Thanks Dixie, Happy New Year

hugs
M

S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom

5 posted 2004-01-01 02:00 PM

Always enjoy your words!

You play so well, you do!

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-01-01 02:11 PM

Thank you Mr. Grey... I am in a strange mood today...so I will play a bit longer

Happy New Year
M

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

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Pennsylvania

7 posted 2004-01-01 02:46 PM

why is it,,that,,when you do slip into a freudian slip,,,,,,it never matches the shade of your cheeks?,,,,,
take care,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2004-01-01 02:57 PM

well maybe it's a good thing

~smiling here

M

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2004-01-03 07:55 PM

Enjoyed...James

LngJhnAg
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10 posted 2004-01-05 12:47 PM

This is really great, Maureen. Humorous and thought out well. It's great reading the lighter side of you.

Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2004-01-05 01:22 PM

Yep...excellent job!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2004-01-05 05:46 PM

Thank you James and Susan

yes Lj, I have all kinds of sides to me...it just takes someone to bring them out.Thank you for enjoying my slip of words.

M

hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 2004-01-05 08:41 PM

applauding

alan6501
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14 posted 2004-01-05 09:05 PM

A part of me that shyness holds,
through words can be expressed.
But only in the written text
do I become undressed.

I identify with this stanza so much. That is exactly how I feel sometimes. Very cleverly written poem. I love how you can play with your words like that.

McLean
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since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

15 posted 2004-01-05 10:16 PM

Salutations!

I like the "freudian slippers" thing...fun fun read.

McLean

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